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The Black Door Writing Prompt

Writing prompt: A door of living obsidian appears at midnight in the center of your city, and only you can hear it breathing.

My eyes sprang open the vision of a black door searing into my mind. My heart began to race and a sense of unease, or fear, or impending threat nearly overwhelmed me. Just a dream It’s just a dream. My body doesn’t understand that, so I close my eyes and focus on taking deep, calming breaths. Just a dream. 

The vision in my mind became more clear – a door, taller and wider than any door I had ever seen, shining like it was made of polished obsidian stood right next to the historic water fountain in the little downtown of our city. Part of me can’t seem to shake this, can’t seem to relax enough to abolish the image from my mind. 

Looking at my watch, seeing that it just passed midnight, maybe I should just throw on some slippers and drive downtown to confirm it’s just a dream. No, that’s ridiculous. Insane. Logical people don’t go on a little joy ride to make sure they’re sane before falling back asleep. No. Sane people just go to sleep. 

Maybe you’re not sane

My internal dialogue is not helping. Maybe I’m not the sanest person. I’m certainly not conventional, not accepted by the banal society of my smallish town. Conforming to their preferences is what I’d consider insane. So what if I’m quirky? So what if I’m going to fling back my covers, put on my slippers, and drive the scant few miles downtown to check on an obsidian door that is 100% not going to be there? It’s after midnight, it’s not like anyone is going to see me. 

My mind made up, I did just that, flinging back my duvet and sliding my feet into slippers. This doesn’t demand dressing or normal shoes, I’m not even getting out of the car. Looking down I notice I’m wearing the moth-eaten nightgown that’s for comfort and definitely not for looks. Sighing, I grab a robe, touch the bun of hair on the top of my head, grab my glasses, and head out the front door. 

This is insane. This phrase feels like it’s being tattooed on every bend and fold of my brain. Because on many fronts this was, in fact, insane. 

And yet, I could feel something tugging at me from my heart, some weird preternatural pull towards downtown. 

“Maybe I am insane” I mumble to myself. And maybe I am, but I have to know, and I’m not sure if I prefer for there to be nothing there, or for some mythological black door to be waiting. 

There are too many cars as I get within two blocks of the fountain. This place is a ghost town after ten PM, so why are there so many cars? My heart rate picks up the pace. Could it be because others are drawn to a giant black door? It’s starting to feel like an alien abduction movie and an ominous feeling of foreboding nearly overtook the persistent warmth pulling me towards this city center. Maybe this is some mass hallucination? Some toxin in our water supply?

I decide to park a block and a half away from the fountain and go the rest of the way on foot. No, I did not dress for this, nor am I wearing appropriate footwear, and yet that pull feels tighter, more insistent. And then there’s the breathing. I could hear it slightly from within the car – it sounded like a steady rhythm, normal breathing. At first I thought it was my own, but realized I was breathing far faster. When I got out of the car, I could almost hear a hitch in the breathing, like whoever it was gasped, or stopped breathing for a beat. When it resumed, it felt faster. As the pace of the breathing slowly increased my footsteps matched the pace, my heart pounding in double time. 

Turning the corner, the breathing sounded more like the exhalation of a sigh, a sound so full of relief and the barest hint of a smile. My heart didn’t slow, my breathing increased. Looking up, about a football field away was the fountain, lit up and beautiful, with a crowd of people surrounding a midnight black, gleaming door that towered over everything. It was twenty feet high and maybe fifteen feet wide. The door from my dream. 

And it was humming. I could feel the vibrations of the hum – not a tune that I was familiar with, but a tune that my body seemed to understand. My feet propelled me forward towards the door. As I got closer the humming became more upbeat, a feeling of joy and anticipation in it. 

Who was humming? Did someone have a microphone and speaker? As I got closer, the crowd was chattering as they looked at the door.

“What the heck is that?” an older gentleman said. He, too, was in his pajamas and slippers. So I wasn’t the only one awoken by this. Had we done some sort of shared dreaming? Did that manifest this door? Was this some sort of witchcraft and our dreams were hacked? That would be a really cool trick if it hadn’t been done on me!

All of the chatter made it difficult to make out full conversations. I got as close to the front of the crowd as possible to see the door. Some sort of mentally agreed-upon barrier was in place, because only one person was closer to the door, while everyone else kept about six feet back in a circle surrounding it. 

There it was, the door, as beautiful and alluring as it was in my dream. No, it was even more appealing. The pull from my center mass felt gravitational, unavoidable, and the humming was now smooth and melodic, feeling almost like a lullaby. 

“That tune is beautiful,” I said to no one in particular. No one responded. Everyone was so enthralled by this behemoth of a door that magically appeared.

“I think it’s Banksy.” a woman with a full face of make-up and silk nightgown with a robe with feathers – like a caricature of Blanche Dubois, perfectly put-together. Though, her logic is sound. Maybe this is some modern art installation. It had all the components of art, and it got a bunch of homebodies out of their houses after midnight, so maybe it’s just that. 

Even the shared dream might be explained. Perhaps we’d all been slowly being fed images or ideas of this subliminally so when it appeared it just seemed supernatural, when it’s really just marketing. That seemed reasonable. 

Feeling disappointed and jaded, I turned from the door to return home. The humming stopped with a squeak. It was definitely a male voice, further confirming the idea that it’s Banksy.

“No, please don’t leave me.” the voice was smooth, deep, but soft and warm, an edge of panic in his voice. It felt like warm apple cider, filling and warming my very core. Instinctively, I turned back to see what had happened to spark this reply, only to find that no one had moved. I stood on tip-toes trying to see the man that was near the door, only to see it empty.

“I don’t think it will let anyone get close to it. Did you see how he was trying to walk closer? It was like the ground was moving the opposite direction.” a woman diagonally to me said to someone. 

What? I pushed my way a little closer, still feeling a pull, but not wanting to follow it. I don’t want to be anywhere near this door. It calls to me, but it scares me. 

I stepped out of the circle, closer to the massive black thing. I could feel it vibrating, hear its own other-wordly music humming through my body. The sound was filling my brain, flooding it with harmonies, feeling the paints of each note caressing my mind, touching each part of it, of me, it was feeling for something. The tendrils of the melody stroked the borders of my memories, kissed at the recollections of joy, sorrow, anger, disappointment, and converted them into sounds and colors. My mind exploding with rainbows of light and spirals of vibrancy – tints and tones I don’t know if I’ve ever recognized before. Each caress felt solid and welcoming, like a lure. 

My eyes popped open – I hadn’t even known I closed them. The sounds of people yelling crashed into my ears.

“What are you doing?!”

“How did you get that close?”

At that I looked up and noticed that I was directly in front of the door – the spot that I assumed was a handle almost too high for me to reach. What was I doing? All of this is more than suspicious. Random black, possibly murder doors don’t just wake people up and then give them candy – it was most definitely not a pinata. And yet, I could not move; I could not even contemplate turning around and walking away. There was something on the other side of that door that felt  like me. Like some part of me that was missing and I didn’t realize it until I heard that humming, felt that voice inside me. 

So I did the only logical thing I could do, I reached my arm up to the handle and pushed the door open. 

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Writing Prompt Challenge

Fellow book sluts (or however you self-identify),

I am entering into a self-guided writing prompt challenge, and you’re welcome to come along with me – 30 days, 30 20 minute writing sessions, with at least 1,000 words – writing prompts generated by random things, or AI, etc.

I am not doing NaNoWriMo this year, but I am going to write every day in November, and starting all of that in October (or just before it). Look, when the muse is hot, you do NOT ignore her, so I am taking full advantage of the succubus and going to write, write, write.

I’ll post the writing prompt on TikTok and/or BlueSky (Unsure of any sort of totalitarian regime takeovers that may make one platform more challenging than the other. I encourage you to write your own stuff from the prompt – the more we write, the better we become!

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Dystopia Fiction Writing

The Garden

He had the urge to clear the ground, to look out and see nothing.

“Darling?” the familiar voice interrupted his thought.

“Hm? Oh, yes dear, you’re quite right. The garden has become quite the oasis.” he replied automatically.

More words tumbled from the woman’s mouth, but he stopped listening, only imagining orange flames licking each leaf of the garden before him. The corner of his mouth quirked up thinking about the charred remains of this magical place. Maybe then he’d finally have some rest.

The woman kept babbling. He was familiar with the words; he’d heard them countless times. Looking beyond the green of the garden, he could see the familiar figures watching them from the horizon.

The same thing was happening in every other garden on that street, possibly in that city, or maybe every corner of the world. Colin didn’t know how far it extended and he wondered how many others could see through the façade? Maybe none. Maybe he had to figure this out on his own.

The days repeated in this unrealistic loop for what seemed like ages. Colin never remembered eating or sleeping, just always watering the garden having this inane conversation with his wife. A wife he didn’t know – not her name, not how they met, literally nothing. How could she endure this never-ending mirage? If he could he would have frowned, but he couldn’t – he could only smile and be engrossed with watering the garden. He wondered if she was the same – trapped in this nightmare, but completely aware that it’s fake.

His mind wandered to the rows of garden fences stretched as far as he can see, up until the shadowy figures beyond. Was everyone here trapped the same way? How had they gotten there?

He tried to think back beyond the garden, beyond this moment in time, to see if there was something before. He saw flashes of a life outside of the garden. There was a body of water, he could remember lazy days on the sand, the touch of a woman, and an intense feeling of love and desire for her. Had he lived this life?

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Nonfiction Writing

What if I fall?

“What if I fall?” she said.

“Then you fall.”

She sighed, wiped the tears that were streaming down her face, looked up and took that first, unknown, terrifying step.

Nothing miraculous happened. No, she didn’t fall, but she also hadn’t made it across the white chasm.

“Will it be like this for all the steps?” she asked.

“Most of them.” the answers weren’t a voice, they weren’t really words, but feelings that she had translated in these expressed words.

She looked around at the expansive nothingness surrounding her. Standing on what felt like solid ground, but nothing underneath, breathing what must be air, but no feel of it. There were no sounds, no movements but her own.

It wasn’t an option to return to the comfortably numb place of sitting with her eyes closed, even though that still pulled at her. It beckoned her to return to the safety of stationary life, to the calm comfort being frozen. She had awakened, but she was so very afraid.

“You can go back, but it only gets harder each time you do.” the formless words filled her mind.

“Have I done this before?”

“Many times.”

“Then why don’t I remember?” this was said aloud, her voice was cracked with dryness, the sound a broken whisper that felt jagged in her throat.

“Because remembering is too painful.”

She swallowed painfully, her dry mouth unable to bless her throat with liquid comfort. “Do you tell me this every time?”

The answer felt like a warm, comforting hug wrapped around her entire body, filling her with compassion. Yes, every time.

Tears reemerged. She didn’t want to go back, but was so scared to move forward.

The comforting hug pulled her forward, urging her. She took another step in this nothingness and didn’t fall.

She wept with fear and hope mingled into a bittersweet cocktail and stepped again.

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Dystopia Nonfiction Writing

Arizona

The attack was over in seconds. The level of coordination it took would be studied for decades. No one believed an entire state could unite in such a way. Every city, small town, and nearly deserted space was coordinated. It helped that law enforcement and local military were in favor of the coup.

What baffled the US Government was how quickly they could build the wall. They realized too late that the wall had been started years earlier, in the unseen parts of the Arizona borders. Then with almost every adult citizen willing to help, they were able to build it completely encircling them.

That was so long ago now. No one thinks about it unless it’s a research assignment. We just know that Arizona is the country you can visit where with enough money, you can do literally anything. It started with a macabre sort of Fantasy Island travel concept. The folklore tells us it began with someone wanting to hunt a unicorn. True, they’re not real, but for enough money you can make something look real enough. This led to Arizona importing various endangered species to fuel their tourist trade.

Inevitably they had to know it would turn to humans. And now, Arizona’s number one import and industry is humans. In the beginning they tell us these activities were banned, and Arizona was chastised by the international community, until the international leaders started getting caught taking their own dark vacations there. It didn’t take long for the world to become quiet about it.

And now? Now, people as young as 16 can visit any of Arizona’s 51 theme parks, ranging from Westworld, the purge, thunderdome, or death race. Apparently all of them were inspired by stories from long ago.

Arizona – more deaths than people.

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Fantasy Fiction Writing

The Key

She opened her handbag and tipped the contents onto the floor in a desperate attempt to find the key. She knew it was in there, there was no other option.

After searching for what felt like ages, she slumped down on the ground and cried. “How could I have been so stupid?” she berated herself. That key was her only link to discovering the truth behind her employer’s bizarre behavior.

He seemed perfectly normal and approachable some days, and then disheveled, surly, and downright curmudgeonly on others. It was more than that. It felt like he was two different people, a sort of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde scenario. Wasn’t that based on legitimate bi-polar disorder, or schizophrenia? She was unsure, and maybe using the smuggled key could answer these questions. Maybe there were medication bottles in his private area that would explain so much.

She knew it was ridiculous to even care. It was just a job after all. Yes, it was a good job that she liked, but it’s not like she was a VP or anything, she was just an assistant. Well, as a good assistant, shouldn’t she be predicting her manager’s needs and whims? How could she do that if she was unaware of a malady that plagued him? Yes, she had settled that this logic was extremely sound.

It was all for naught, as she had lost the ruddy key. She sat there on the floor, distraught and worried that it would be discovered she stole the key and then lost it and would lose her job. Her heel moved and the sound of something solid and metal rang out. The key!

With satisfied jubilance she stood, threw all the contents back into her purse, slid the key into the lock, and turned. The quiet clicking of the lock felt louder than it should have been in the quiet warehouse space. She closed it firmly behind her. The room was dark, made even darker by dark carpets, and décor. She pulled the tiny flashlight on her keys to illuminate the space.

What she saw was a fantastical laboratory straight out of the 18th century. Glass tubes and bottles connected by copper joints in an ornate maze with different colored liquids in them. The wall held a tall cabinet that stored dozens and dozens of jars with herbs, liquids, and even animal parts floating in liquid. What is this guy into? She thought nervously. Was he an actual mad scientist?

She heard the scrape of something outside the door so she turned off the flashlight and scurried under the table. Dim lights came up in the room and she could see it more clearly. It was straight out of Sherlock Holmes – a dark red Persian rug underneath her, thick dark wood table above with a long table cloth that provided some coverage for her. His black boots, that she now recognized looked like they were from another time approached the table and stood there. She could hear him clinking bottles around.

Her heart raced and she prayed silently that he would finish quickly and leave, or go to a place where she might be able to silently escape, but that’s the sort of thing for movies. So she froze there awaiting anything that might give her a glimmer of hope for how to leave and still have a job tomorrow.

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Fantasy Fiction Writing

Which witch?

She had done a poor job of hiding the damage, so naturally she kept futzing with it in a vain attempt to make the skin look normal again. Katrina exhaled, “Worst. Witch. Ever.”

Which isn’t technically accurate, as this was her first spell, and she had far more natural power than she knew. So much so, that a coven of witches, clear in another county, was knocked clear flat onto their backs by the shockwave of energy sent out by that one small spell.

Katrina pulled on her grandmother’s hand-knitted cardigan to cover up the mangled flesh on her upper arm. She gathered up the witch accoutrements that led to the disastrous spell and chucked it into a canvas bag with the shattered sense that she would never have the power her grandmother had.

Just prior, the coven of witches were standing up in the middle of farmer Gorgon’s sheep field. He always fancied Minerva and cleared his sheep away every month for their full moon ritual. He was bound by the coven to not peek at their rituals, which he supposed included naked lady orgies writhing in pleasure before a sacrificial altar. Such a man thing to imagine. Nakedness does not immediately mean sex, any proper witch will tell you that. It is, however, an excellent way to ensure you’re directly connected with the divine spirit and can channel the elements of Mother Nature more powerfully. So, yes, there was nakedness, but no, there were no orgies. And sacrifice is a harsh word. Is it sacrificing when you eat chicken nuggets? No, it’s eating, so leave the coven in peace when they bleed a chicken and turn it into soup later.

Minerva pushed herself up from her prostrate position on the soft grass. “What in the name of the Goddess was that?!” she yelled. “Juliette, were the runes properly placed?”

The young, naked brunette had fallen beside Minerva. She nodded.

“Then what could possibly have gone wrong?” Minerva was getting to her feet when she saw a glowing orb of light floating above their altar. She joined the other women who had seen it with gaping mouths.

Katrina wanted nothing more than to curl up and sleep away this failure, but her body was restless and rejected that idea, so decided to go for a midnight stroll. It was a warm summer’s eve, the summer solstice in fact. The day her grandmother gave her specific instructions for what to do after her passing.

“I failed you, g-g.” she said to the bright moon above. Being outside under that moon was comforting. The full moon always reminded her of G-G. Even as a small child her grandmother would take her into the woods on the full moon to do magic. As a child it was so real, the possibilities of magic, but as she grew older she knew it was just an old hippie reliving some acid trip from her youth. That was the only logical explanation. And then G-G died, and left Katrina her grimoire and a cottage no one in the family knew about. Yes, laugh all you want, she had a witch’s cottage, and not in a highly desirable area, no, in fact, it was literally in the middle of nowhere in Wales of all places. WALES? Who but sheep want to be in Wales for goodness’ sake?? Though as she spent more time there trying to understand this witchy stuff, it was rather beautiful. The moonlit strolls in nature were oddly peaceful, and not creepy. Not once did she imagine Jason Vorhees or Cujo waiting behind a tree. That’s not strictly correct, she did imagine it more than once, but that was in the beginning.

The glowing orb began to move. The witches gasped collectively as it slowly floated away from the altar. Minerva grabbed the hands of nearby witches and they all started clasping hands together, encircling the floating and moving orb. “Grant, oh great Goddess, thy protection,” Minerva began and all the ladies joined in. The orb approached a witch with mocha colored skin. They spoke their prayer louder “And in protection, strength.” The orb nearly touched the witch, but rose higher above her head and out of the circle continuing on an unseen path. The witches abandoned their chanting prayer and scrambled to follow it.

Katrina came to the small creek not far from G-G’s magical house and crouched beside it to touch the cool clear water. It always felt like a restorative spring to Katrina and she quickly wondered if it had magical properties. She pulled her left arm from the cardigan, scooped up a handful of the creek water saying a healing prayer she found in the grimoire “Deep peace I breathe into you, O weariness, here:
O ache, here.” while slowly pouring the creek waters onto the distorted flesh. Katrina’s eyes widened as the flesh began to smooth with each droplet of water.

The orb passed over farmer Gorgon’s fence. The witches, still naked, looked at each other to see if they were going to pursue in their current undress.

“CLOAKS!” Minerva barked. “CECILY, THE VAN!” she shrieked.

The coven moved quickly, throwing cloaks over their naked forms, a large van raced towards the fence, stopped and the coven piled in, though not everyone had a seat.

“Follow that orb.” Minerva instructed. And the van broke through the fence and followed the orb crushing crops and grass on its impossibly slow journey.

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Fiction Romantic Comedy Writing

8-bit romance

“And this wall will have a massive neon sign with a bunch of retro icons, like Pacman, Donkey Kong, y’know, the 8-bit stuff.” Searching his hazel-green eyes for any sign of approval. “As you can see from my prospectus, Mr. Kerrigan, the marketing analytics look promising for this area. And, I already have the social media campaign going, y’know, to whet the kids’ appetites.”

He looked at the specs I drew up with the detailed project plan showing milestones. 

“Miss Granston,” he replied with a smile, revealing a deep dimple in his left cheek, visible even under the closely-trimmed beard. Had I noticed how hot he was? Dark wavy hair, a  jawline that could cut diamonds, he definitely worked-out, his pristine suit tailored to clung to that muscular physique. Was I blushing? Dear lord, I was blushing. And he smirked. Kill me now. 

“It will be a pleasure, doing business with you.” He shook my hand with another dazzling smile.

Elated, I jumped at him, wrapping my arms around his broad shoulders in a hug. “Oh Mr. Kerrigan, you won’t regret this! I’ll make you so proud!” Still clinging to him, I realized that maybe hugging the bank representative wasn’t the most professional thing to do. “I’m hugging you, aren’t I?”

Without moving, “Yes you are.” He replied flatly.

My arms stayed inexplicably where they were, “This is a little awkward then.”

“It is.” He paused, I kept holding him in a never-ending hug. “Although it might be less awkward, if you released me.”

“Oh, right, yes, of course.” I let go, fumbling backwards, losing my footing, I felt myself falling backwards. Reaching out for something to keep me upright, all I could grip was his tie, pulling him along for the ungraceful collapse to the ground. I slammed on my back, and he came barreling down on top of me. The breath thrown from both of us. It felt like eons passed, but it was likely mere seconds. Not only was he on top of me, but he was nestled between my legs, his face planted in my cleavage.

“Awkward 2.0.” I said in a weak attempt at humor. 

He pushed himself away from the cleavage, “More like awkward to the death star power.”

I nodded and smirked at the reference, “Yep. That’s my specialty.”

“To be awkward?”

“Amongst other skills, but yes, awkward, lacking in grace, and having strange men between my legs.” I clasped my hands on my mouth, “Oh my god, that’s not what I meant – I mean, I didn’t mean the way that sounded.” Closing my eyes and covering my face with my hands, I just wanted to disappear. Yet another hot guy repelled by my weirdness. 

He laughed, pushing himself off me, extending a hand to help me up. “I knew what you meant. Are you alright?”

Rubbing my back, “I think I fell on something, but I’ll make a full recovery. I have some ibuprofen. Better living through chemistry.” groaning at how hopeless I was.

Pulling out the annoying childproof bottle, and like a child, I had to read the instructions “push down and turn.” Only it wasn’t turning. “Why isn’t this working!?” it came out louder than expected. Pushing harder, turning with more focus, the bottle opened and flew out of my hands a dangerous projectile, pills ricocheting like buckshot, the bottle itself striking him in the forehead.

“Oh my god, what is wrong with me!?” I rubbed where the bottle struck him between the eyes, “Are you okay? Boy wouldn’t it be nice if all those pills hadn’t scattered everywhere?” I smiled sheepishly.

“Wouldn’t it though.” He said flatly, raising an eyebrow. 

Oh no, he’s pissed. Could he pull the loan now? “I’m so sorry, Mr. Kerrigan. I’m just really clumsy.”

That body-melting smile returned, “Maybe just a little.Good thing we’re only funding the loan for the arcade, and not your personal injuries.”

“Oh thank goodness. I thought you might deny it to me after these shenanigans.”

“Not at all. I’ll email the documents to be signed electronically, and the funds will be available as soon as Tuesday.” With that he shook my hand and left.

Three months later, the arcade opened to a line out the door. New Order blasted overhead, quarters lined up on video games for the next person’s turn. I had done it, and it felt amazing.

“Miss Granston,” a deep voice that fueled fantasies made my insides jello. I turned around to see the banker.

“Mr. Kerrigan! What an unexpected surprise.”

“It’s not every day a loan is sealed with a hug, then a tumble, then a projectile thrown at my head.”

“Not enough for you? I mean maybe we can insert you in a pinball machine to be abused further?” 

“Definitely not, I’m much more of a Donkey Kong guy. Pinball is for the weak.”

“Good looking and brains. You’re my kinda weirdo, Mr. Kerrigan.”

“Dan, please.”

“Dan. Danny-boy, Dannerino, Crocodile DAN-dee.” I babbled.

“Oh Crocodile Dandee is definitely the one.”

Wow. He banters. Wait, and he’s not in a suit. “Dan,” looking him up and down, “did you come here to play video games?”

He pointed to his Space Invaders shirt, “No, I came to play this video game. But there are like seven quarters before mine, so I’m just wandering until it’s my go.”

“A nerd after my own heart.”

“Can I buy you a drink?” he asked.

“From my own bar?” I squinted at him.

“Um… yes?”

“Only if you can answer this question: Star Wars or LOTR?”

“Oooh that’s tough. Star Wars gets respect for being the OG, right? But LOTR is truly the superior fandom.”

I took his arm in mine, “Oh Dan, this looks like the beginning of a beautiful friendship.”

He stopped and looked at me, “I was hoping for something more than friendship.” His eyes darted to my lips, then to my eyes. My body flushed all over, 

I looked down shyly. “I’d like that.”

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Fantasy Fiction Writing

Sentinels

“You will not move, you will not twitch a muscle. You are sentinels, and sentinels are living statues. You are no longer of this world, but above it. It bows to you.”

Under the ornate golden armor, emblazoned with a phoenix flowing like flaming liquid on his breastplate, beads of sweat pooled and dripped down his body. His still very living body. How was one to become a sentinel, above the world, to be that level of infamy? This was the first exercise designed to filter out strong from the weak. They were all worthy, they had all passed the trials, the tests of history, criminology, legend, and ethics, but being worthy alone did not make you fit to be a sentinel. A sentinel was better than everyone but the gods, and a sentinel, by their intelligence, worth, and strength were then chosen by the gods to protect the world they created.

The suns, both midday and early day glared down on the row of golden beacons, hundreds stretched across the crest of the fiercest desert, like jewels decorating a red coat of the gods. It seemed like hours had passed, the beads of sweat had turned into fountains. Jarnius could hear the clanking of others falling or fainting from the scorching heat. “Not me, not me, not me.” He thought to himself. “I am a sentinel, a master of will. I am chosen by the gods to protect and keep their world safe. The relic of arnuieta has had my name engraved on it since the dawn of time, for I am a sentinel.” He whispered the prayer over and over again. Never closing his eyes, always staying alert and observant of those around him.

The Captain walked in front of the cadet to his right, peered into the armor, pushed on their shoulder, whispered to his lieutenant and then approached Jarnius. Looking forward, refusing to blink, shrink, or crumble, Jarnius kept the prayer in his mind the relic of arnuieta has had my name engraved on it since the dawn of time. The captain pushed on his shoulder and he didn’t budge. He was a statue. He was above this world. He would not yield.

The captain spoke to the lieutenant, who wrote something down. Jarnius could see the word “arnuieta” and nearly cheered, but he knew they used every tool in their arsenal to unmake a sentinel, and vanity or pride were worthy tools. The prideful are never chosen, no. The prideful are sent to the games and made a spectacle. Jarnius would not fail like that. He had no pride to speak of, this was all he had and he could not fail.

The early sun had set, and the midday sun was low in the sky, allowing the first moon to peek over the farthest horizon. The gleaming row of golden dots was heavily broken, whittled down from hundreds to several dozen. Jarnius had not weakened, his arms had lost feeling hours before. Now was the wait for the frozen night when the midnight moon would rise. The golden armor was freeze resistant, but it would not stop flesh from freezing, or a weak person to freeze and lose consciousness. But Jarnius knew that once the second sun set, he was halfway through this fierce challenge – the easy half. For at night, not only must a sentinel tolerate the cold, but the ice wisps that came to torment them, to infiltrate their armor, even some could insert into one’s eye.

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Fiction Writing

Breaking and Entering

He threw the Big Gulp cup into the trashcan on the corner of the empty intersection.  He took long steps, sliding his feet with each pace to blur his footprints into something unrecognizable.

Passing in front of the brick building of lighted windows that seemed to reach the sky, he moved into the dark and narrow passageway between these brick titans. Looking up, he saw the snow on each fire escape landing and sighed. He stared for longer than he should before his courage found him. Flexing his fingers, ensuring the gloves on his hands were up to the task, he began climbing the trash dumpster to gain access to the pull-down ladder. He slowly pulled the ladder so it could be as quiet as possible. He noticed the wind picked up on the street and hoped that would dull any sounds he might create.

Once on the ladder, he wiped each step to keep them similar and vague as to who might have been there. Only three flights he thought to himself and began the slow process of moving up those flights, unseen and silent.

Once he found the third landing, he could see inside the warmed room, the familiar blue airplane lamp that sat on a child’s nightstand. He saw the back of a boy with messy dirty blond hair, leaning over something. Probably drawing again, he thought as he absently caressed the folded-up drawing in his pocket.

This inspired him to get to work, he took out the flat head screwdriver and quietly popped the window lock and began to push it up, until he heard her voice from the other room.

He hid himself from the window, white steam coming from his rapidly breathing mouth. He needed to temper himself to go through with this. He was not the bad guy, no matter what anyone else said. He wasn’t crazy. He knew this was what’s best for his son, even if the judge couldn’t see it.

Steeling himself, he turned to the window again, gently pushing up to discover it wasn’t locked. The cold air must have swirled into the child’s room because he looked up immediately and smiled.

“Papa!” the child squealed happily.

“Shhh” pressing his finger to his own lips. The window was not open enough so he could get in and get out with the boy if his mother appeared.

As if on queue the woman ran into the room, seeing the boy pointing to the window, she turned in horror to see the face that had plagued her nightmares for too many years. She calmly went to the boy and said something the man outside the window couldn’t hear. The boy smiled happily at his mother, then to the man, got off his chair and went with his mother.

“NO! No, no, no, NO!” he yelled, the sound softened by new snowfall, but still echoing against the brick buildings narrowly separated. He couldn’t see into any other room, he assumed she took the boy to flee, which would mean she was downstairs in moments. Without hesitation he descended the fire escape, not worried about noise or disturbing residents of the building. His sole focus was speed.

His footsteps crunched on the snow as he ran as quick as his footing would allow. He waited at the base of the stairs to the narrow building, looking for signs of his son and his ex-wife. It felt like ages had passed and yet she didn’t appear. Had she doubled back to trick him? Had he missed her? Impossible. He would hear the boy regardless.

A rough tap on his shoulder pulled him from his thoughts. “Excuse me, sir.” He turned to see the dark blue uniform of NYPD, a short, stout man with a bushy moustache continued to speak, “We have a complaint of someone loitering here. Possibly an attempted kidnapping.” The beat cop eyed him, “Can I see some identification please, sir?” it was a polite demand.

“Oh. Of course, officer.” He started digging in his pocket, appearing to reach for his wallet, “I was just picking up my girl for a late-night supper.” Quickly pulling out a knife from his pocket and slicing the cop’s right cheek then the left, elbowing him in the face, forcing the officer to stumble and fall to the snow, droplets of his blood falling to the new white snow drifts. With all his strength, he kicked the officer in his ribs, turned to run away.

He knew this meant he only had one chance, he had to take his boy by force and disappear. He was ready to kill if needed. He had done it before, even though that bitch never appreciated what he did for her.